Chapter Commentary

Chapter Commentary wasn't a thing until like ch60 of Dead Inside, and was hit and miss until ch100 or so. But I imagine that a list of chapter commentaries would be useful to new readers (and readers who are catching up. And also for reference.)

disclaimer: as of ATR chapter 65, I've stopped doing chapter commentary on this blog. It now kind of lives on on tumblr.

RE: Dead Inside Edits. Because I'm editing Dead Inside, and some chapters got wholly rewritten, old chapter commentary might be wildly inaccurate. To see any of my notes on edited chapters, head over here. It's mostly changelogs, but I talk about why I changed things and how I feel about the changes, too.

The biggest ones are

Kairi Batch 1 edits - various chapters throughout Part 1, biggest being chapters 30, 46, 87, 97.
Kairi Batch 2 edits - mainly because chapters 111-119 got rewritten from the ground up, plus more


Dead Inside

Part 1
ch58/59, ch69,     ch80,
ch90,     ch93,    ch94,    ch95,    ch96,     ch97,     ch98
ch100,   ch103,

Part 2
ch104,  ch105,  ch106,   ch107,   ch108,  ch109,  ch110,
ch111,  ch112,  ch113,   ch114,   ch115,   ch116,  ch117,  ch118,  ch119,  ch120
ch121,  ch122,  ch123,      ---       ch125,   ch126,  ch127,  ch128,  ch129,  ch130
ch131,  ch132,  ch133,   ch134,   ch135,   ch136,  ch137,  ch138,  ch139,  ch140
ch141,  ch142,  ch143,  ch144,   ch145,   ch146,  ch147,  ch148 -x,  ch149,  ch150
ch151,  ch152,  ch153,  ch154,   ch155,   ch156,  ch157,  ch158,  ch159,  ch160
ch161,  ch162,  ch163,  ch164,   ch165,   ch166,  ch167,  ch168,  ch169,  ch170
ch171,  ch172,  ch173,  ch174,   ch175,   ch176,  ch177,  ch178,  ch179,  ch180
ch181,  ch182,  ch183,  ch184,   ch185,   ch186,  ch187,  ch188,  ch189,  ch190
ch191,  ch192,  ch193,  ch194,   ch195,   ch196,  ch197,  ch198,  ch199,  ch200

Part 3
ch201,  ch202,  ch203,  ch204,   ch205,   ch206,  ch207,  ch208,  ch209,  ch210
ch211,  ch212,  ch213,  ch214,   ch215,   ch216,  ch217,  ch218,  ch219,  ch220
ch221,  ch222,  ch223,  ch224,   ch225,   ch226,  ch227,  ch228,  ch229,  ch230
ch231,  ch232,  ch233,  ch234,   ch235,   ch236,  ch237,  ch238,  ch239,  ch240
ch241,  ch242,  ch243,  ch244,   ch245,   ch246



Can't Escape

ch46-48
ch50,        ch51-53,   ch54,    ch55,   ch56,   ch57,   ch58,   ch59,   ch61,
ch62-63,   ch64-65


ASAS

ch3,    ch7,    ch10,   ch11,   ch26,   ch33,   ch35,   ch38,   ch42,   ch43-44,
ch50,  ch53,  ch60,   ch62,   ch75,   ch79+80

Aqua's Overleveled / Whatever it Takes oneshots


Nothing's Fair

ch1-2,  ch3-5,   ch6-9,   ch10-15,   ch16-18,   ch19-23,   ch24-26,   ch27-31


All that Remains

Part 1
ch1,    ch2,    ch3,    ch4,    ch5,    ch6,    ch7,    ch8,    ch9,    ch10
ch11,  ch12,  ch13,  ch14+ ch15,  ch16,  ch17,  ch18,  ch19,  ch20
ch21,  ch22,

Part 2
ch23,  ch24,  ch25,  ch26,    ---     ch28,  ch29,    ---
ch31,  ch32,  ch33,  ch34,  ch35,  ch36,  ch37,

Part 3
ch38,  ch39,  ch40
ch41,  ch42,  ch43,  ch44,  ch45,  ch46,  ch47,  ch48,  ch49,  ch50
ch51,  ch52,  ch53,  ch54,  ch55,  ch56,  ch57,  ch58,  ch69,  ch60
ch61,  ch62,  ch63,  ch64,  ch65 KINDA

Bonus commentary for 59/63/64