Tuesday, October 29, 2013

AGAIN VERY SORRY FOR NOT SENDING THIS TO MY BETA (ch178)

LIKE I HAVE SAID A MILLION THOUSAND TIMES BEFORE LIKE

THERE WASN'T A PROPER TRANSITION BETWEEN CH177 AND 179 BUT THERE WASN'T SUPPOSED TO BE AND I IMAGINE IT WAS CONFUSING A LITTLE?? IF YOU NOTICED

I STILL FEEL AWFUL AH

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh annyway


(link) (tracklist)

Because I've been playing CoM. And. Stuff. *shrug* also sort of proud of this mix so uh yeah

SO UH



AND THEN (thsi is largely all caps sorry)

THAT WAS NOT OKAY RIKU
DON’T THROW PARALLELS AT ME

My notes on what’s going through Riku’s head right now “because why in the why is what why no that is not no not a good idea why would you even”

IN WHICH THERE ARE SIMILARITIES BETWEEN VEXEN AND RIKU AND I’M SORT OF NOT OKAY WITH THEM WHAT IN THE??
Like there’s the similarities I noticed when he was standing before Xemnas, and there are also other ones and I just?? ????

IT TOOK ME A SEC TO REMEMBER THE SIMILARITIES but I remembered them ha. In the initial blergh for ch172, Vexen went "stupid stupid stupid" at himself which is what Riku does
and then in ths chapter Riku complains he needs to keep his emotions in check and it reminded me of Vexen


HAHA RIKU SAID HE WOULDN’T HELP VEXEN PFFFAAAAHAHAH


LIKE HOLY SHOO DANG NAMINE PLEASE THIS IS RIDICULOUS THEY ARE BEING DISGUSTING
THEY ARE BEING DISGUSTING
SO CUTE I COULD BARF AND IT’D BE RAINBOWS AND PUPPIES
DEAR GROODNES

Like I was gonna write this from Vexen’s pov and be like why the eff is riku so excited about hb?? But now it’s gonna be something more along the lines of holy shoo get a room EXCEPT ACTUALLY THIS IS VEXEN HAHAH HE’D BE ANALYZING IT AND
Yeah that or I need to write this from Riku’s pov?? I wasn’t?? planning on it but his thoughts about Namine beign so dan g affectionate towards him might be important
EXCEPT HIS BRAIN IS FRIED AND

Namine
Namine no

NAMIEN FRIKENKNOWS
Riku’s like “…uh….” and she just ROLLSHER EYES AND PULLS AWAY FROM HIM so he can have some space and hoopefuly so his brain starts working mg


~and thn I told myself that I should post my template dialogue for this chapter so I'mma post the template dialogue for this chapter
(okay well it's not all of it. It's the interesting bits.)


Technically I wouldn’t mind taking a vacation in general (Namine tells him, ALL UP IN HIS GRILL AND SMILING AT HIM AND GOSH DARNIT NAMINE MUST YOU) It’s not like it has to be to test anything
Y’know, I wouldn’t exactly mind either (Riku replies and they’re staring at each other eyes meeting and dear gracious I think he’s trying to put his hands on her hips and hold her close and FRIKKEN SEXUAL TENSION WOULD YOU QUIT IT)
And it’s not like anyone can keep us here (Namine giggles AND IS SHE PLAYING WITH HIS HAIR WOULD YOU. QUIT. IT. but I mean they’re just staring at each other and in their own little world and it’s no wonder it’s so frikkne obvious)
Well, (coughs) we might as well kill two birds with one stone (Alpha interrupts) Make it both a-uh- vacation along with a test.
Great! (and Riku’s excited and it’s partially because Namine’s where she is and partially because yay going back to HB)
But you should wait a few days before you go (Alpha adds)
Sure thing
You got it!
Why Hollow Bastion? (Vexen asks because why is Riku so excited to stay in the parallel version of his home that hasn’t even been restored yet?? Sure RG is beautiful and a wonderful place to live but you’d expect Riku to enjoy the islands more? Given? Who he’s a replica of?)
Oh, just… (Riku begins) Just ‘cause
Why not Destiny Islands?
Because… (except Riku can’t words. Not to Vexen. his answer has to do with his family not that he’d tell Vexen about them oh no. but Namine hears his thoughts—hears that he doesn’t want to go to Destiny Islands because he’s never entirely felt like he belonged there and she just silently grabs his and squeezes it and she wants to kiss him but he’s talking ha)
Ah, to be honest, I think I’d die of boredom on Destiny Islands (Riku says, finally) Hollow Bastion has that Heartless problem, remember? It… keeps me occupied
He has trouble sitting still (Namine teases and she is literally standing right next to him, their hands clasped together her head resting near his shoulder and she can bump him with her hip and he looks down at her)
I do not! (he argues but yes he does)
Ah (Vexen says and while he doesn’t doubt Riku has trouble sitting still he does doubt that’s all there is to this because Riku’s way too happy but then again with Namine giving him this much attention maybe it’s no surprise)
Hey Riku? (Namine asks, leaning up against him ‘cept she’s on tiptoe and kind of right next to his face like propping herself up by having her hands on his shoulder?? Next to him??? fuuuu she’s being awful)
Mm? (he asks and he’s all eyes for her alskjf definitely enjoying the attention alskdfj do I need to write this from his pov or?)
I’ve got some pictures I wanna show you (she says and she is really turning on the flirt YOU LITTLE) do you wanna—
Yeah (like he doesn’t even hesitate or argue it’s just yeah because of course he does)
(and so they leave)
AND OF COURSE VEXEN  NOTICES THAT NAMINE’S BEEING REALLY DAMN AFFECTIONATE TOWARDS RIKU and of course Riku’s grinning like an idiot because he loves it loves the attention—no—the affection
And so once they’re gone
Vexen turns to Alpha
“You saw that, right?” he asks
“It was hard to miss”
“Do you think--”
“It’s not my business.”

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