can i just
be lazy
and
copy pasta all my notes over?
i think i will
(oh but here's your convenient link to the chapter first)
Apparently all my scenes
with Kairi happen at night now xD
CRAP KAIRI IT CAN’T BE
LIKE THE VERY NEXT DAY. NO. IT’S BEEN LIKE THREE DAYS SINCE YOU’RE LAST
CHAPTER. C’MON KAIRI. (I really can’t afford to not space things out)
I’m sure light does some
damage to Nobodies, BUT CERTAINLY NOT AS MUCH DAMAGE AS IT DOES TO HEARTLESS
BECAUSE HEARTLESS ARE DARKNESS AND LIGHT JUST REALLY HURTS THEM okay? OKAY.
Kairi probably ran into
Dusks. Or Dragooons… mmm….
Prowess. *crosses “use an
uncommon word” off the to do list* (I’m really really bad at that though)
I suppose I could’ve had a
scene with Kairi actually fighting
enemies. But. This was what was in my head. Maybe next time?
NO KAIRI DON’T HAVE
ANOTHER NIGHTMARE YOU POOR BABY.
(thank goodness she didn't)
So yeah after deciding to
just have Kairi’s scene cut off where it did—I feel her scene is obsolete
but…??—I was like let’s do something with
Shad! Except I had no clue what to do with Shad. I had no ideas, no scenes
previously lined up, no nothing.
Then it occurred to me.
I CAN WRITE SOMETHING
BETWEEN AXEL AND ROXAS
For the most part I was
going to keep Roxas stuff that didn’t involve interacting with the Main Cast in ASAS,
but I feel the scene I ended up going with is important because most scenes between Roxas and Axel are.
Plus this is Axel first really interacting with Roxas, and I have to mention
that Roxas has Oblivion, yata yata…
Roxas baby I’d love to
write from your POV but I also want to be in Axel’s so tough luck baby (most
likely I’ll rehash it from his anyway—I really
enjoy writing from Roxas’s POV)
Actually it was only one
month?? No. Two. Two since he died. One and a half since Dead Inside began.
Yeah.
OKAY SO I WASN’T GOING TO
PUT A LOT OF ROXAS STUFF IN DEAD INSIDE.
BUT I REALLY WANTED TO
WRITE AXEL AND ROXAS RUNNING AROUND TWILIGHT TOWN SO.
Whoops not 16. Pretty sure
he’s dead.
~he’s emphasizing the we
because Roxas is not an object, he is a person and if something goes wrong with
him, Axel’s gonna make sure Roxas is just as involved as everyone else because
he deserves to be more than anyone
OKAY I MAY OR MAY NOT HAVE
KILLED XION OFF IN THAT ALLEY WHERE YOU SHOW UP FOR EVERY MISSION. I only said
she died “in one of Twilight Town’s” back alleys and if we go with the idea
that there are parts of the town that we don’t explore in-game, then, y’know,
it’ll be fine.
That. Or. I’ll just have
Axel and Roxas show up under the Clock Tower. That. That one place. I’ll have
to look up its name but I know you start some missions there so I can just do
that.
Okay Axel that’s cool we
can just not describe Roxas’s Keyblade as anything other than black. BUT WAIT
HOW WILL THE READERS KNOW IT’S OBLIVION!!?
Yeah poor Axel. Roxas is
just like LET’S KILL MORE HEARTLESS and Axel’s like uhm we’ve been around the town three times now. I’m pretty sure you’ve
killed all the heartless. Twice.
yeah that's it
ugh i'm tired and i wished i could stay asleep when i dozed off
anyway
(it mentions expanding this chapter but, while I did expand it, I cut the expansions out because they weren't really necessary and stuff)
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