Friday, May 30, 2014

Chapter 220 commentary

Okay but I've probably got like 20 chapters left of Dead Inside--I'm currently writing 229 so that means. I guess we will end up with 250 at the end of this. I hope so. (not that I'm counting on it)

REGARDLESS I'M WRITING THE FINAL BATTLES NOW AND THEY'RE. THEY'RE SUPER PAINFUL BUT. I'M HERE. HERE IS THE END. YAY. CELEBRATE.

on another note I did a post on the cast's body-type headcanons if anyone want's em



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I said it on tumblr but it’s important enough to say it again here
I’m not following the actual layout of TWTNW
There aren’t nearly enough areas for what I need
The actual layout of TWTNW is boring
There’s like only five areas
It’s
Lame
Also there are apparently more than 2 entrances to the hall of empty melodies on the bottom floor. I’m saying there’s four. Yay.


UHM OKAY BUT ACTUALLY NOW THAT I THINK ABOUT IT IDK WHY THIS NOTE IS HERE BECAUSE. LIKE. THESE TWO BATTLES ACTUALLY HAPPEN IN AREAS OF TWTNW THAT EXIST. GO ME. 


Roxas can’t redirect Xigbar’s, Xemnas’s (duh), or Saix’s nobodies. Xaldin’s take a lot of convincing, but they will move for him. Ha. haha he can’t move the norts tho o h w o w

I called “reeks” a “horrible butchering of his name” and wondered why Riku didn’t comment on it right away
He comments on it later and I was like “oh there it is”

(This makes more sense with the brainstorm on hand)


I don’t actually think Kairi’s met/seen a lot of Org members but she has run across 37 and how should she know better about him + I want to say she saw a glimpse of Xaldin once. Idk.
I’m really proud of the description of Demyx tbh not one mention to the color of his hair or eyes or even skin just a general impression of his attitude + distinguishing features (the slouching and his strange hair which lets be honest is pretty distinguishing)

I mean just in general with the org their hair is noticeable Xigbar has a ponytail down to his feet Xaldin doesn’t have much special but it is super long. So is Vexen’s. Zexion’s obscures half his face. Saix’s is LONG and BLUE. Axel’s is an unnatural color of red looks like a porqupine. I’m not sure how to DESCRIBE Demyx’s but he’s got almost a pompoudour thing going on??? there’s an official word I’m looking for but I haven’t found it yet. Luxord doesn’t have anything unnatural about his hair—though it is basically pure white I guess that’s something. Marluxia’s is pink. Looks a little like flower petals tbh. Larxene has frikken antennae okay. And then Roxas’s is sorta special but in relatively toned down Anime Protag sorta ways

OK AY LIKE I MADE A BIG FUSS ABOUT BRINGING UP THE ORG MEMBERS NAME’S REGARDLESS OF SORA OR KAIRI KNOWING THEM BUT
THEN I MAKE IT FLOW FLAWLESSLY WITH THE WORDS AND I JUST??
I WAS PRACTICING FIRST IMPRESSION DESCRIPTIONS AND Y’KNOW I’M STILL GOING THROUGH WITH THE REFERRING THEM BY NAME DESPITE NOT GETTING AN INTRODUCTION SO
Y’KNOW
IDK


straight from my notes of course:

“I got my memory back and realized why I tried to left and then Saix killed me”
Way to be blunt about it Roxas
AhhHHHH WAIT PAINED NOISES HE DOESN’T REMEMBER HIS DEATH I SPECIFICALLY STATED IN CANON HE DOESN’T REMEMBER HIS DEATH GOSH DARNIT

I fixed it but still that was frustrating when I realized that


Idk who’s watching Riku’s progress through the castle and corridor proofing every area but someone is
(they can’t have proofed the whole castle because Joseph’s getting around JUST FINE)

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