Ch231/SoShad reviews

I'm going to put the reviews under a break because spoilers

but

I'm. Thank you. Thank you so so so much. Just. Thank you.  

I can't tell you how much hate I was going to get for these chapters. How much hate I was going to get over Shad's true intentions and feelings and everything. I expected so so so much of it and while I'd made peace with that ("fics are supposed to be self indulgent I can do what I want") it's still really nice to get the exact opposite of what I expected. 

Thank you.

ch231 from Shadowclaw98

Well that was unexpected.
I have a feeling I know who's heart it really is though, if it were Sora's then...well Sora wouldn't be there haha
Loved this from start to finish btw

laughs weakly idk how anyone didn't see this coming because I was so awful about keeping it a secret on tumblr but I guess enough mentions towards it being self indulgence and "if only"s cover it up well, huh? Or you don't follow my tumblr. (which I understand completely it's a mess and not even half of it is FtPverse)

Shad was trying to say "it's part of your heart" and not all of it which is something the two of them may have mentioned before but I don't remember. That was probably a clarity error on my part, though, and I'm too lazy to fix it. Haha.
It'll keep you'll wondering, anyway, and that's a good thing

Thank you. I loved it too. I just cried a lot.


ch231 from lordibau

Good job. You humanized the shadow little by little, and then give us a real tear-jerker because of his death, his reasons and his emotions. Splendid.I sure hope it's a "Sora can give a life of their own even to lifeless puppets" kind of thing for later. I really grew fond of what you did with the shadow...

Thank you. I can't even come up with anything better to say. Thank you.

I was really fond of him, too. It hurts having to speak about him in past tense hhhhhh


ch229 from Peach

Shad really doesn't want to fight anymore and this is painful and sad to read :(

It was really painful to write, too. I mentioned on tumblr, but I literally had to physically lie down to process what was happening and like?? Not cry.
Like I usually sit on the floor with my laptop on the coffee table as I write and so I'd just kinda pause and flop over onto the floor because. These chapters were really painful.


ch231 from Peach

(Best chapter title ever)
So that's it for Shad...? I'm sad about that, he ended up being a really great character. I mean, I knew he had to die eventually, but still...it's depressing...
And SoShad ended up canon on one side. Can't say I'm surprised by that considering all your posts about it on tumblr.
Also, don't apologize for any part of it, this chapter was great.

(it is, ain't it?)

I'm really sad about him going too oh my gosh I was a wreck after realizing what finishing this chapter entailed and. I get teary-eyed every time I think about/hear Props & Mayhem because I relate it to the battle and especially the end of the battle and. sighs okay I'm rambling.

SoShad posts on tumblr? I have no idea what you're talking about. 

Thank you. Thank you.


and Megamewgirl I got your review but. I already mentioned I was a wreck after writing this and realizing that I'd just killed Shad so uh